Group+Response+1-+Hazlitt's+Argument


 * Read the below paragraph written as the introduction to the prompt: "//Write an essay in which you agree, disagree or qualify the assertions made by Hazlitt".//**

==In this article, Hazlitt asserts that all women are egoists. However, all women are not individualists. In this assertion, he appeals to syntax. This helps his argument by an effective use of words; he starts his argument with questions and ends with answering them and explaining his answers. Hazlitt also states that women are individualists; however, all women are not selfish.==

1. If you were NOT a member of the group who produced this paragraph, you will offer them feedback so that they may receive a 9! Consider the following when framing your response:

- whether or not they addressed the prompt -was the introduction appealing? -were there any grammatical/spelling errors? -what can be added or detracted to make the intro more effective? **Do your best to offer feedback that has not yet been stated!** **Feedback due Saturday by 8pm** ******CLICK ON DISCUSSIONS to offer your feedback. Begin posting and responding there. Aim to make your responses as scholastic as possible****** These are just some of the questions. However, you can add much more! Help this group earn a 9! 2. If you were a member in the group that produced this, wait. After your classmates have offered you feedback, comment on the level of feedback. Was it useful? What in particular was useful? How would you use this to better your writing? If it was not useful, why not? Do you see mistakes on your own after reading?


 * Your responses should be posted by 8pm on Sunday!**